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submission package feedback

You’ve put all that hard work into your novel and to think an agent may not even open the attachment if they don’t get past your query letter. I’ve been there myself so I understand how heart wrenching that can be. It took me a long time to learn how to make my letters sing but in the end, I learned the art and science of it. My last submission, I had a 70% rate in terms of request for my full MS. I can’t promise that in your case, but I do promise to work with you on your letter and synopsis until it shines if you trust me to have a look at it. Several of the authors I have helped have successfully managed to acquire literary representation.

A normal submission package comprises of a query letter, a synopsis and a sample of your writing (normally from your first chapter), and I will go though all of these, providing editorial notes on your overall content, tone, voice, and more. It is so key to get this part of the submission process right in order to get you out of the slush pile and I hope to be able to help you send your package out with confidence. 

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DB CARTER,

Gen Fic Author, UK

Thanks to Michele Sagan for a wonderful job editing and helping me with my query, synopsis, and first chapter.

 

A thorough job with encouraging words and all for a fair price. I feel much more confident querying agents now! 

DB's books are currently for sales on Amazon.

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CHRISSIE WRANJA
Gen FIc Author, UK

Thank you Michele Sagan for your help with my query letter!

 

I’ve send new submissions out now with much more confidence!

 

For anyone else querying, I can only recommend Michele’s fast and thorough feedback.

RICHARD HARTZER
Christian Author, USA

Michele has been working with me on my query letter, synopsis, and first chapter and her feedback has been amazing.

 

She is fun to work with, and her suggestions have made my querying package much stronger. I appreciate her help and support. 

MC THOMAS
Thriller Author, USA

Thanks to Michele Sagan

for a wonderful job editing and helping me with my query, synopsis, and first chapter.

 

A thorough job with encouraging words and all for a fair price. I feel much more confident querying agents now!

MC's book is currently on sale on Amazon.

ELIZABETH DAWSON
YA Author, USA

I highly recommend

Michele Sagan if you are looking for an editor for your submission materials.

 

She was very thorough and gave great feedback on my query and synopsis.

 

I feel much more confident as I prepare to enter the query trenches!

T. JULIAN BELL
Sci-Fi Author, UK

Hey writers, if you are looking for a query, synopsis, or editor checkout Michele Sagan. She really helped my query and synopsis sing.

 

She’s a pleasure to work with and takes the time to get you ready for the next steps.

Bell's books are currently on sale on Amazon.